Thursday 8 December 2011

Poetry as a Can of Coke: A Journey through Poetry from Marlowe to Ginsberg and Beyond

Elizabethan times were a nebula of great revolution in the mercantile, scientific, technological, religious, and political spheres. Poetic performance in theatre was an entertainment medium reaching broader audiences, even commoners. Verse was penned with an aristocratic reader/viewership, including the monarchs and policy-makers of England. The recent advent and promulgation of the printing press had, of course, lent another dimension to poetry besides public recitation and performance: private, solitary consumption, with folios and manuscripts circulated among intellectual circles. Aesthetic merit was at a zenith:

But far above the loveliest Hero shined
And stole away th’ enchanted gazer’s mind,
For like sea nymphs’ enveigling Harmony,
So was her beauty to the standers by.
Nor that night-wandering, pale, and wat’ry star
(When yawning dragons draw her thirling car
From Latmus’ mount up to the gloomy sky
Where, crowned with blazing light and majesty,
She proudly sits) more overrules the flood
Than she the hearts of those that near her stood.[1]

Here we have the “other guy,” Christopher Marlowe, who pushed the limits of blank verse and blazed a trail for Shakespeare. He wasn’t exactly a vocational poet, just like Chaucer and Sidney weren’t. These were men entrenched in the apparatus of power and government. In fact, Marlowe, who if I may compare poetry to candy wrote in “Hero and Leander” the sweetest, glossiest verse I’ve ever encountered, was a spy, a bad boy, and a religious dissenter, reportedly stabbed dead in a bar fight.
            The great charm of Elizabethan and Jacobean culture was soon to face extinguishment, and the last sparks of this era’s creativity and genius, less the bardic nature of the great playwrights, can be seen in John Milton’s “Paradise Lost”:

                    …from the bough
She gave him of that fair enticing fruit
With liberal hand: he scrupled not to eat
Against his better knowledge, not deceived,
But fondly overcome with female charm.
Earth trembled from her entrails, as again
In pangs, and nature gave a second groan,
Sky lowered, and muttering thunder, some sad drops
Wept at completing of the mortal sin
Original; while Adam took no thought,
Eating his fill, nor Eve to iterate
Her former trespass feared, the more to soothe
Him with her loved society, that now
As with new wine intoxicated both
They swim in mirth, and fancy that they feel
Divinity within them breeding wings
Wherewith to scorn the earth.[2]

Milton was almost the most self-serious poet to ever walk the earth, who, blind and politically crushed, did not pen “Paradise Lost” but rather dictated it to his daughter(s). We sniff out a sort of closet bard whose priggish Puritanism obstructed his really jumping into the lewd, decadent, inventive, human terrain of Marlowe and restricted him to a reverent, school-boyish display of classical learning.
            Like Shakespeare,[3] Marlowe, Spenser, and Sidney, he was in the proximity of power, serving as Cromwell’s Secretary of Foreign Tongues during the provisional government.[4] And if Milton’s verse can be called stuffy and blocky (F. R. Leavis diagnosed the “Miltonic thump”), and if “Paradise Lost,” despite its portals into sublimity, psychologically endearing rendering of Satan,[5] intoxicating riffs about the “ambrosial rose” or “frutage fair to sight,” and potency of books 4, 7, and 9, was in a cynical but quite correct sense a deeply flawed and regurgitative slog through Church history, then it still represents the high-water mark of pure craftmanship and erudition perhaps in all of English literature, and signals a shift from dramatic poetry[6] to more strained, solitary efforts. Although ebbing and flowing with the poet’s changing reputation, his shadow hung broodingly over English poetry for centuries.
            The void during Milton’s aftermath was filled with the over-intellectualized, highly skilled, highly boring Alexander Pope, and also Dryden. But at last, Milton’s influence, with its high idealism, poet-versus-the-world orientation, and colourful aesthetic power, paid dividends and inspired the Romantics:

Therefore let the moon
Shine on thee in thy solitary walk;
And let the misty mountain-winds be free
To blow against thee: and, in after years,
When these wild ecstasies shall be matured
Into a sober pleasure; when thy mind
Shall be a mansion for all lovely forms,
Thy memory be as a dwelling-place
For all sweet sounds and harmonies; oh! then,
If solitude, or fear, or pain, or grief,
Should be thy portion, with what healing thoughts
Of tender joy wilt thou remember me,
And these my exhortations![7]

Although Shelley and Byron might be the archetypal Romantic figures, Wordsworth’s probably the archetypal Romantic poet, having their characteristic lyricism and manic outpouring of emotion, in addition to his own prodigious imagination. His poetry was intended for a broad readership, and though in his advanced age he’d accept the position of poet laureate, he was “radical” in his early politics and always an island unto himself. This new debasement from power and politics and delving inwardly into the irrational unconscious is a marker of the poetic mind up to the present. 
Another of the post-Miltonic age’s signatures is shorter poems with less narrative, and indeed “The Recluse,” the very long poem of which “The Prelude” is a prologue, never surfaced. I would argue that, notwithstanding, say, the “Cantos” of Ezra Pound, the shortened poetic length and divergence from narrative continued into modernism, as did the lonely, scholarly bent. These were poems written by inward-looking, educated males (mostly). There was a fragmentation, disjointedness, and obscurantism permeating this important wave of verse, exemplified in Eliot or Auden – whether due to the Great War, contagion from stream-of-consciousness novels, or the confusion of a modern, technological society. Accessibility took an intentional hit, just as it did in prose.[8]
I think that in the generations since the great modernist poets like Auden, Yeats, Pound, and Eliot, poetry has splintered off from popular (and even canonical) literature, just as literature has dwindled in its overall influence over intellectual and public discourse. This isn’t a complaint against contemporary practitioners – merely an observation that poetry has faced marginalization into almost hobby status, with less prestige and money involved, and an ever-thinner readership. Could the reading public name their favourite poets as easily as they could name Roth, Updike, Morrison, or even DeLillo? Or could a poet’s mug grace the cover of Time magazine, as Franzen’s did?
It goes without saying that technology has obliterated attention spans, with new media like the Internet, film, digital music, and video games stealing millions who would’ve been reading a century ago. And with increasing commoditization and a push for utility and efficiency, a novel, with its didactic yarn, is favoured by the reading public over a poem, which is seen as comparatively strange and emotionally charged and which, rather than a novel’s streamlined package of history, insight, and entertainment, seems often intended to simply give the reader a jolt, like a can of coke.
I’ve tried to chronicle how poetry became shorter and more obscure, but this isn’t a satisfactory explanation of its current position – its poise and sentiment are also instructive, and to exemplify these I’d point to Allen Ginsberg, whose achievements represent one of the last gossiped-over canonical scenes in poetry. I’d class his poetry as wrathful and visceral, memorable and drug-riddled, disaffected and left-wing, unmetered and free, more loud than ceremonious, and more about amalgamation than narrative. I don’t mean to denigrate his very significant contribution or suggest he’s not a vital poet, but I pose a question: Has he become, to poetry’s detriment, the new prototype?[9] If we consider the full gamut of modern poets this loses plausibility, but when we invoke poetry slams, which account for a disproportionate amount of modern-day poetic expression and publicity, well, Ginsberg seems like the messiah of the poetry slam. And while I wouldn’t cosign Harold Bloom’s declaration that poetry slams are the “death of art,” I would admit that from my North American perspective,[10] slams are a sort of trendy, coffeehouse hugfest with half the performances dwelling on the speaker’s bulimia, or uncanny phobias, or subjection to racism, or sexual experimentation. This may sound insensitive or bigoted but I lay it down here to illustrate poetry’s drift away from lyricism, verse, and metaphor and towards a refuge for the disaffected.
Another modern poetic phenomenon, I would argue, is hip hop music from the early nineties, which I’d rather listen to than slam poetry. Though strange to admit now, with the music industry plainly manufacturing gangster myths for financial gain, there was once upon a time a great whirlwind of creativity emerging from the Five Boroughs of New York City, with hungry, disillusioned African-Americans reciting rhymes in the park and eventually recording them in studios. While not strictly poetry, the lyrics are recited instead of sung and bear a plethora of traditional poetry’s signatures: seriousness, rhyme, (loosely regulated) metre, wit, and wordplay.[11] However, the golden years of Big L or early Wu-Tang Clan are strictly over, ruined by an inevitable materialism and a market orientation, and I suspect hip hop’s time is over.
It’s not my contention that strong contemporary poetry is non-existent, but that poetry’s primacy in Western culture has waned dramatically, and that its modern popular manifestations – poetry slams, rap music – have tried to quench the public’s thirst for rhyme and wordplay. Obviously there are living masters like Heaney, or international notables like Tranströmer or Adonis, and a great Scottish flowering. I acknowledge that my views are filtered through the bias of inexperience; I’ll confess my lack of immersion and expertise in poetry[12] and appeal to my youthful ignorance, Canadian origins, and vocational love of literature (including poetry) in hopes that my perspective is at least provocative – that poetry in the public eye has taken a bruising. Allow me to excerpt Obama’s inaugural poem:

Praise song for struggle, praise song for the day.
Praise song for every hand-lettered sign,
the figuring-it-out at kitchen tables.

Some live by love thy neighbor as thyself,
others by first do no harm or take no more
than you need
. What if the mightiest word is love?

Love beyond marital, filial, national,
love that casts a widening pool of light,
love with no need to pre-empt grievance.[13]

While misguided to peg poetry’s current health to whatever age’s U.S. presidential poem – inaugural poems are only a recent phenomenon, after all – still, what a sacrilege compared to Robert Frost! “Praise Song for the Day” is banal, flat, and unskilled.[14] And I think it all but invites the public to relegate something of the greatest importance to the sidelines – to demote the poet to a speaker of platitudes, a cheerleader waving dull images.
            I’ve argued that Elizabethan poetry was both performance-oriented but also available for solitary reading; that through John Milton the performative, bardic element fell by the wayside as poetry became a sage, lonesome, gentlemanly pursuit; and that in the twentieth century it took a left-leaning turn and lost some of its scholastic self-seriousness and now lives mostly, as far as the public observes, in poetry slams and yellow, dog-eared anthologies.
            But how can poetry be rejuvenated? Novels steal its thunder partly because of the modern demand for prepackaged lessons Saran-wrapped in entertaining narratives. The public wants something more straightforward and they want more than a rush or a buzz, they want a journey. My answer? Take it back to Shakespeare. How about a history play about the JFK assassination, replete with Dallas police officers, lawyers with Yiddish-Bronx accents, and the Kennedy family, in an unpretentious but poetic Robert Fagles-type verse? A novel would never confer the same ceremony or solemnity on such a tragedy. And maybe some history buff who’d have otherwise seen an action flick that night might just pick up a poetry book. Maybe the public’s imagination might get captured again, and maybe the poetic imagination, the love of words, would stir once more and enter the public conversation. To hell with poetry slams and rap music. The public wants interactive poetry? Let’s give them the theatre.  


[1] “Hero and Leander,” www.classic-literature.co.uk/british-authors/16th-century/christopher-marlowe/hero-and-leander.
[2] “Paradise Lost,” www.dartmouth.edu/~milton/reading_room/pl/book_1.
[3] Who I can’t help but think was a commoner, maybe very talented, whose material was at least partially supplied by Francis Bacon and possibly others.
[4] A pairing whose militant Christianity makes Bush-Cheney’s look dovish.
[5] Might this, along with the sleep-inducing Son of God, be instructive of Milton’s conscious or subconscious morals?
[6] Cromwell even banned performances on the stage.
[7] “Lines Composed Above Tintern Abbey,” www.bartleby.com/145/ww138.html.
[8] Disclaimer: From here on in, my historical argument grows more tenuous and, well, debatable.
[9] That is to say, left-wing and activistic, bearded and weathered, a hippy of the people.
[10] I have indeed witnessed at the Glor Sessions that poetry in Ireland is (predictably) at a more advanced stage than Canada’s.
[11] Actually, I wouldn’t dismiss the prospect of hip hop music having exerted some influence over poetry slams.
[12] I am very eager for recommendations.
[13] “Praise Song for the Day,” www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/20545.
[14] It made me cringe and curse when I heard it live.


Monday 28 November 2011

The Garbage Man (lyrics)

You’re gambling, kid, you’re playing roulette
You’re never gon’ win, you’re racking up debt
Roll the dice all ya want, the result’s just the same
It’s rigged from the start, your girl’s a card game

Look at this ace I’m giving to you
I scored with your chick, you hadn’t a clue
Don’t look so shocked, but I’m your savior -
The luck of your life is that I laid her

Doing the scut work, they call me a hero
I’m bringing divorce rates down to zero
If your lover’s trash, I’ll take ‘er out -
Just call the garbage man, shout it!

Your relationship’s dead, you’re drinking the dregs
I’ll junk it for ya, you’ll grow new legs
If your girl’s gon’ cheat, I’m doing a favour
Once you catch wind ya won’t talk to her later

Don’t call us Don Juans with beer cans,
And don’t hate your neighbourhood garbage man
Our work is noble, yeah it causes you pain
We give the stress test, without it what do you gain?

Doing the scut work, they call me a hero
I’m bringing divorce rates down to zero
If your girlfriend’s trash, I’ll take her out -
Just call the garbage man, shout it!

(repeat first two verses)

(chorus)

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For my free poem, I considered finishing my Rime (see Mundane Autumn entry), but that poem is interminable compared to anything we’ve read in class and I figured the archaic diction might not be well received. As luck had it, a close friend who’s the trombone player in a ska band said he wanted lyrics, preferably rhyming tetrameter lines with a good hook. I looked up the lyrical structures of some conventional rock songs and came up with a two-stanza verse, a chorus, and another two-stanza verse, and indicated that the chorus would then be repeated, then the first verse, then the chorus again. I jumbled the lines substantially during composition of the lyrics. I do enjoy the “If your girlfriend’s trash, I’ll take her out” line because of the two intended meanings (if she’s trashy, I’ll take her on a date and if she’s like trash, I’ll take out the trash for you). But I know it could also be construed in a violent, misogynistic way and I hate this, so I watered down the first instance of the line to “If your lover’s trash, I’ll take ‘er out.” The second stanza of the second verse is the weakest link, but maybe adding a foot to the first line would improve it marginally. Another metrical tidbit is that the lines in the first stanza each have a “caesura” in them and I’m not sure if this would translate well musically. Also, I think there’s a sort of weird dissonance or clash between the two metaphors – gambling and garbage. All in all, writing song lyrics was a novel, humbling experience, and I was pleasantly surprised at the class’s response. We’ll see if anyone churns a song out of this. I highly doubt it, and I’m not sure it wouldn’t cause me more embarrassment than pride.

Saturday 19 November 2011

iGod

The Earth’s a shiny hulk
Orbiting around a lightbulb
The filthiest dirt is microchipped
And trees are spraypainted metallic

The papery moon’s a new Eden
Coveted for its inertness,
Its blank slate for beeping machines

Human hearts pump electronically -
Consciousness is chemical

The sun is blocked out

Gates led us out of the caves
To Jobs, the Buddha incarnate

Whose MacBook
Is more spiritual
Than nature

Nobody dies a pneumonitic death
Souls are saved to disc
Google Maps links the galaxies
The problem of sex, mechanically solved

But if the epochs could be rewound
I’d travel backward, before engineered embryos,
The Sino-American star wars, CDOs and ICQ

And prescribe a cult of poetry and song
To preempt the atomization of focus

People would die, but they’d have lived

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I was to write a poem inspired by the Irish poet Paula Meehan. iGod partly took inspiration from her Child Burial, a beautiful and powerful piece that rewinds time and almost invokes “the Fall”, and was also partly inspired by Death of a Field. The poem's a dystopian vision of a world saturated with technology, and I’m obviously not the first or last writer to address this. In fact, after I wrote it I was watching a Charlie Rose interview with Franzen, Wallace, and Leyner where someone mentioned how there’s no downtime anymore - how even in airport waiting spaces there are TVs. To compare this complaint in the nineties to our current world of smartphones is quite instructive. My poem is entirely without meter, which is a bit of a departure, as I find meter a good way to frame words, a convenient way to brainstorm even. People liked iGod and I’m pleased with it overall. Of course, the last line is rather redundant and the whole backwards thing happens too quickly.

Saturday 12 November 2011

Mundane Autumn

Brigit vacuums and blocks the door,
Her back is turned to me.
Do I wait, or go, return upstairs?
She looks! And jumps ten feet.

The leaves are golden limey brown
As I descend the stairs.
A TV van is parked outside:
A creepy-looking lair.

Beneath the overpass that runs
Above the winding road
There lies a stain of whitish grey,
The birds’ great unload.

It lines the sidewalk like the scene
Of someone’s tragic fall,
Has blotched the pavement many months,
Will do so till snowfall.

I give the wrong directions to
A passerby from France.
A man corrects me straight away –
I can always count on chance.

At Luigi’s Italian diner chefs
Are Transylvanian-born.
I’m ignorant of that region other
Than Dracula and porn.

And thus wraps up my afternoon,
The chips are fully eaten.
I know you’re jealous of my day,
It surely can’t be beaten.

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This poem did not come to me easily in terms of material. I was straining hard for content and went for a walk with my notebook to seek inspiration. I indeed walked up behind a woman vacuuming and blocking the door, knowing she’d jump 10 feet if she turned around and saw me, indeed saw a massive splattering of bird droppings that almost reminded me of some cordoned-off forensic scene of a freak accident. The actual ballad vibe is unfortunately not there, although metrically it basically conforms, at least to the meter of Coleridge’s canonical ballad Rime of the Ancient Mariner. (We also had the option of blank verse, and I’ve already done that with my Bali Pastoral, a rather stiff poem that I do like both for its packed, colourful details and personal evocations.) Mundane Autumn is sort of funny and random and it gives me pleasure that I wrote it based on a half-hour of experiences on a Saturday afternoon. I admit that the final stanza is a dud, and that the ballad aspect is lacking. I originally planned on completing the third part of a very long ballad inspired heavily, all too heavily by Rime of the Ancient Mariner. Here’s a sample:


            An engineer withdrew his gun
            And aimed it at the glow,
            Which charged with sonic might and knocked
            Him to the ground — too slow!

An afflicted engineer            He trailed the glow with neutered will,
succumbs to                      Resistance disappeared;
bizarre activity.                    We waved our hands and begged he stop —
            His deference was weird.

            He skulked into a room and sang
            A hymn we’d never heard,
            Vociferating like a mad,
            Enraged, suffering bird.

            We studied with amazement grand
            This mockery of man,
            Deciph’ring how to fathom him,
            When half of us straight ran.

            We flew from orange spurts that zinged
            Through air engorged with screams —
            Some tripped! — these victims were betrayed
            By surging starry beams.

            I spied the exit to our ship,
            Illuminated blue,
            And groped through shadows down the ramp,
            I swear this all is true.

            The docking bay in which I hid
            Was brimming full of spears
            Of flashing purple speckled light
            Refracting throughout mirrors.

The astronaut                    And through the flashing spears there spun
experiences an                   A lavender blanket of calm:
aurora in the midst              Aurora tranquil fit for scene
of the calamity.                  Of beaches with sunsets and palms.

            A soothing cool diffused through skin,
            I breathed in healing rays.
            The more I drank the fount of light
            The more the warmth did pay.

            I pictured worlds colliding —bam!
            And all reduced to dust.
            The stars withdrew into the womb
            To nurse at nature’s bust.

The dreams                       These fancies of suspension formed
are interrupted.                    Elixir awesome, whole —
            But loud commotion ripped through dock
                                                And heightened peace it stole.

Monday 7 November 2011

I See

                                                            I see
A bartender as focused as an air traffic controller,
A bustling street with no street signs,
A Grafton Street busker who could fill a stadium,
A stream wetting a peat field,
A wizened train clerk nodding directions,
A shot of Jamieson swirling in a glass,
An Abbey actress playing emotions like a clarinet,
A slippery mountainside covered in moss,
A comic bombing in a half-empty club,
A streetlight reflecting off the Liffey,
A house band playing the same songs over,
A ewe grazing beside the highway,
A spraytanned girl in line at Coppers,
An abbey with doors open 800 years later,
A congenial plumber fixing the toilet,
A cold lake as smooth as crystal,
A migrant worker making another sandwich,
A tricolor rippling in the wind,
A homeless man shaking his cup,
A rainbow I can touch the end of,
A bus driver racing against time,
                                                            And you.

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I was to write a free verse poem and originally I wrote one analogous to Ginsberg’s America, but I was told by a sharp reader that it seemed too hostile, even coarse. I decided to write another at the last minute on the train ride home from Connemara, and began with a list of visual images of Ireland, some poached from my original poem. After I’d compiled my list, I typed it up and split it into “people” on the left and “things” on the right, and thought of adding another category. Still, it wasn’t a poem, as there was nothing to hang these images around.  I had the idea to write “I see” at the start and “and you” at the end, and I think this has a striking and personal effect, great for its simplicity. Dr. Perry and Eunika commented that it was their favourite poem of mine thus far. This highlights the value of striking imagery, accessibility, and quiet power over more technical, old-fashioned efforts.

Saturday 22 October 2011

Underneath


You are as a scary alpine mount I’ve chanced
Upon where the wind blows piercingly brisk and pure,
With a cleansing, invasive breath by which I’m entranced,
Where the arctic cool awakens senses sure
To rouse me wide awake, and the cliffs are steep
And gorgeously bleak, with terrain pristine though prone
To avalanches, freezing pits, which keep
Me worried sick, by nature awed and alone.

When the seasons shift, the ices thaw and deep
Underneath is revealed a hill of holes, a zone
Of muddied tunnels, signs of secret life,
The nordic hill is now an insect heap,
And what I thought was glacial charm is shown
To be hollowed slush with rotten movements rife.


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I think of sonnets as a very standard, bread and butter form that was key to renaissance art, with writers like Shakespeare and Sidney producing whole novel-length books of them on one or a few topics, like Stella, or a young man who should procreate. They seemed borderline obsessive and ruminative, and the strict form reinforced this trait, although invariably modern poets have used the sonnet for broader purposes and with less adherence to form. I’ve used the Petrarchan or Italian type, figuring that the “turn” from the octave to sestet makes it niftier than the Elizabethan, which has as its signature the envoi (rhyming couplet) at the end. I like the sestet in my poem better than the octave, and I shudder at some of the phrases in the poem, e.g. “glacial charm.” Note: “Me guarded, freaked, by nature awed to the bone.” has been changed to “Me worried sick, by nature awed and alone.”