The Earth’s a shiny hulk
Orbiting around a lightbulb
The filthiest dirt is microchipped
And trees are spraypainted metallic
The papery moon’s a new Eden
Coveted for its inertness,
Its blank slate for beeping machines
Human hearts pump electronically -
Consciousness is chemical
The sun is blocked out
Gates led us out of the caves
To Jobs, the Buddha incarnate
Whose MacBook
Is more spiritual
Than nature
Nobody dies a pneumonitic death
Souls are saved to disc
Google Maps links the galaxies
The problem of sex, mechanically solved
But if the epochs could be rewound
I’d travel backward, before engineered embryos,
The Sino-American star wars, CDOs and ICQ
And prescribe a cult of poetry and song
To preempt the atomization of focus
People would die, but they’d have lived
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I was to write a poem inspired by the Irish poet Paula Meehan. iGod partly took inspiration from her Child Burial, a beautiful and powerful piece that rewinds time and almost invokes “the Fall”, and was also partly inspired by Death of a Field. The poem's a dystopian vision of a world saturated with technology, and I’m obviously not the first or last writer to address this. In fact, after I wrote it I was watching a Charlie Rose interview with Franzen, Wallace, and Leyner where someone mentioned how there’s no downtime anymore - how even in airport waiting spaces there are TVs. To compare this complaint in the nineties to our current world of smartphones is quite instructive. My poem is entirely without meter, which is a bit of a departure, as I find meter a good way to frame words, a convenient way to brainstorm even. People liked iGod and I’m pleased with it overall. Of course, the last line is rather redundant and the whole backwards thing happens too quickly.
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